zerozerozero asked:
I am creating a flyer for my new lawn care business. I want to say “Order your lawn care service today!“ But is there any grammar error??
Ipod Nano
I am creating a flyer for my new lawn care business. I want to say “Order your lawn care service today!“ But is there any grammar error??
Ipod Nano
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It’s a grammatically correct sentence; however, I think most people would “hire” a lawn-care service. You might say “arrange for your lawn care today” instead.
Yes, I would use the word request or schedule not order.
In case I’m wrong, it is just my opinion.
I would not say service. I would just suggest; “Order your lawn care today.”
You are offering to service an account for a fee, so placing an order is good. But the idea of lawn care as a service, is not different than an automotive lube and oil service.
They don’t write “lube and oil change service.”
“We care for your lawn–call us today!”
“We care about your lawn–call us today!”
“For (prompt, professional, whatever adjective you like) lawn care, call us today!”
“Call us for (fast, friendly, efficient, whatever adjective you like) lawn care service!”
Think about what image do you want to project. Professional, formal, and efficient? Or friendly, neighborly, local, and affable?
Including photos in your flyer may be helpful. People like “before and after” photos. A photo of a lawn care worker standing beside a vehicle may help. A single-sheet flyer should have no more than 2-3 photos.
If you have been doing lawn care before (even if it’s just mowing neighbors’ yards) list your years of experience!
Good luck with your new business!